Update

After completing my draft, I now need to make certain amendments to try to get my magazine up to a level 4. 

Front Page: I am considering re-doing it, by changing the font of the masthead, and changing the photo. 

Contents: I am considering keeping a similar sort of layout, but also adding a box along the left hand side, so I can add more depth. Also, I need to take a few more photos of other people, to put into the contents. 

Double Page Spread: I feel that my double page spread is the strong point for my magazine, as it has some real in depth elements in. I would like to add a few more photos to make it more realistic. With regards to the article I am going to make it longer, but instead make it a story rather than an interivew.